Wow! this was a really cute story. I just loved the ending. I like all the mystery but it still guides your thoughts in a way. There is just afew grammer things but nothing major. Other then that a job well done!
I really enjoyed this short little romance story. It was vague without being too vague so I got to use my imagination (which I love) but I still felt like I knew what was going on. Apart from a few typos/misspellings the writing was very suitable to the situation, much like the email the guy sent the girl, short and to the point, vague but enough to get the point across.
Thank you. You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me.