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Name: River (Signed) · Date: 17 Aug 2012 5:43 am · For: Prologue

Whoa. this is a great start. I mean, it felt like reading John Connolly and he's my favourite author. You really do have a real author in you, why not publish it? ;)

This is a really great start to a great story. It really did have the historic touch to it, which is great. Not many people can do that so tudos for that. 

I'm sorry for the horrible and non-constructive reviews. this is the first time I'm reading an OF online. But I'm going to follow this story, so see you on the other side :D



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