Reviews for Poetry Book
| Corn Oats Rice and Wheat |
05/26/07 - 08:27AM
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1: The last of my last nights forevermore, neverending
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aww so pretty. but im not quiet sure the beat is right. maybe i was just reading it wrong. i like the injecting with lead bit. :)
Author's Response: i will look into possibly re-arranging it a bit thanks for the idea, and thanks for the review
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| Queen of the Dew |
05/11/06 - 12:50AM
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7: Night time rites
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It's really awesome. I honestly don't know what to say.
Author's Response: thanks
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| Queen of the Dew |
05/11/06 - 12:30AM
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6: Angels fall and rise
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I love it. I wish we could read these in school instead of the boring ones they DO make us read.
Author's Response: LOL ya I know EXACTLY what you mean...
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| Queen of the Dew |
05/11/06 - 12:25AM
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5: As the child dies
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That's amazing. Again, you're really, really talanted.
Author's Response: Thanks alot for the encouragement :)
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| Queen of the Dew |
05/11/06 - 12:23AM
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4: Death
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It's sad. It's awesome, but sad.
Author's Response: I know, thank you for the review!
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| Queen of the Dew |
05/11/06 - 12:07AM
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3: A vampires hunt
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I like it. You have a lot of talent.
Author's Response: Why, thank you kind lady, as I am sure as do you.
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| Queen of the Dew |
05/10/06 - 11:48PM
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2: Scream's
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It's good. Really good. I don't know what to say.
Author's Response: Thank you for the many reviews!
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| Queen of the Dew |
05/10/06 - 11:45PM
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1: The last of my last nights forevermore, neverending
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I love it! It's really good. I, like, speechless or something along that line.
Author's Response: I LOVE this poem, I put all of my other work to compare to it. Thank you soooo much for the reviews!
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| charlierae1123 |
04/23/06 - 09:12PM
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7: Night time rites
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i liked this poem a lot. when i read it at times it was hard to understand but i could get what u were talking about.
Author's Response: thank you for stating your miind
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| panda |
01/28/06 - 06:44AM
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5: As the child dies
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Though I still think I like the first one the most, I do enjoy this one as well. The others seem... juvenile? Immature, perhaps. Not as clearly shaped or formed. But this one is good. Sad, though. But it really points out the choices you have in life. To give or take, to remember and learn or forget. Anyway. I like it! <3panda
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing and evan if you have just insulted me I know its true....
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| panda |
01/27/06 - 02:59AM
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1: The last of my last nights forevermore, neverending
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Wow--Excellent! I don't usually read poetry. I'm not much for it. But this is really amazing. Sounds like a song almost. "We had one choice; To kill, or be killed." I thing that was my favorite line ^^ (Only problem with it was uh, that's two choices. You might consider changing it to something like "We had THE choice--To kill, or be killed." Maybe.) Anyway, really love it. Let me know if you have more poetry that you're planning to post. I look forward to it!<3panda
Author's Response: OMG i didnt see that shhhhh I'll change it thanks I posted more yesterday so read it if you can thanks!
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| kool guy |
01/27/06 - 02:44AM
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1: The last of my last nights forevermore, neverending
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nice keep it up
Author's Response: thank you i had more but they took them off so i posted them as a story as a poetry book each chapter is a story so please review each one seperatly! THANKS!!!!!!
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